Lots of expository thought balloons here. I think some judicious use of Thenurion’s amazing vision for close-ups of things we can only see in the distance here might help to eliminate those- we could see a closer view of debris with burn marks and a shorter caption like “Weapons fire- that explains what happened to the beacon…” for example- but if Thenurion is just a think-things-through kind of guy, then this might be more in character. Can’t tell yet.
One thing about the last panel- the motion streaking makes his body and left arm look like he’s moving, but the unstreaked right arm (his right, not ours) looks like it’s standing still, which feels awkward.
Brown sky. Now I get it.
Lots of expository thought balloons here. I think some judicious use of Thenurion’s amazing vision for close-ups of things we can only see in the distance here might help to eliminate those- we could see a closer view of debris with burn marks and a shorter caption like “Weapons fire- that explains what happened to the beacon…” for example- but if Thenurion is just a think-things-through kind of guy, then this might be more in character. Can’t tell yet.
One thing about the last panel- the motion streaking makes his body and left arm look like he’s moving, but the unstreaked right arm (his right, not ours) looks like it’s standing still, which feels awkward.