How does Thenurion know the crime lord hasn’t stopped his plans? What new information does he have about them since the mercenaries arrived? (Again, this could just be him making an assumption, so it’s Teatime the reader asking, not Teatime the reviewer.)
Also, the “hence” sentence structure seems a bit formal for someone who’s been fairly casual in her tone so far- but maybe that was more of an emotional moment for Saphira, what with her husband being hurt and all, and now we’re seeing her usual mannerisms. Reserving judgment on that for now.
Cutting “northeast” in two for that line break looks weird.
Art is good, though- teleporter activations are definitely a good place to use effects that aren’t seen in most everyday panels.
How does Thenurion know the crime lord hasn’t stopped his plans? What new information does he have about them since the mercenaries arrived? (Again, this could just be him making an assumption, so it’s Teatime the reader asking, not Teatime the reviewer.)
Also, the “hence” sentence structure seems a bit formal for someone who’s been fairly casual in her tone so far- but maybe that was more of an emotional moment for Saphira, what with her husband being hurt and all, and now we’re seeing her usual mannerisms. Reserving judgment on that for now.
Cutting “northeast” in two for that line break looks weird.
Art is good, though- teleporter activations are definitely a good place to use effects that aren’t seen in most everyday panels.