Hard to see the motion lines in the last panel on anything other than the chair- for a minute, I couldn’t tell if the door was opening or Saphira was turning her chair to face Thenurion. Maybe if the motion lines were white like the edge of the door, it’d be clearer?
Also the random splotches in the darkened areas of Thenurion’s quarters- I presume that’s what the room in the first few panels is- seem a bit weird. I know shadows aren’t generally all one shade, but you might want to look at some darkened rooms- or drawings of them- sometime and get a better sense of where darker patches tend to fall, rather than placing them (apparently) randomly like this. Oh, and a perfectly flat camera angle doesn’t give us the best understanding of what the room looks like- try some perspective drawing. 🙂
Hard to see the motion lines in the last panel on anything other than the chair- for a minute, I couldn’t tell if the door was opening or Saphira was turning her chair to face Thenurion. Maybe if the motion lines were white like the edge of the door, it’d be clearer?
Also the random splotches in the darkened areas of Thenurion’s quarters- I presume that’s what the room in the first few panels is- seem a bit weird. I know shadows aren’t generally all one shade, but you might want to look at some darkened rooms- or drawings of them- sometime and get a better sense of where darker patches tend to fall, rather than placing them (apparently) randomly like this. Oh, and a perfectly flat camera angle doesn’t give us the best understanding of what the room looks like- try some perspective drawing. 🙂