Hey, a new character shown in background before he (or she) speaks! Are you getting my advice precognitively or something?
I like Thenurion and Saphira’s body language and multiple conversations here- obviously they have two different relationships as husband/wife and captain/subordinate officer, and that first panel depicts a little moment where they’re not worried about letting the first one show through while they’re acting in the second capacity. D’awww. ^_^
Back to business after that, though- looks like our new guy (or girl) is about to get a full reveal on the next page. But why would you expect weapons traces at the scene of a mass abduction, when the abductors can just beam their targets out?
Remember, one colony (shown in the last chapter) had shields protecting the colonists, and the generator for that had to be taken out by the slavers, hence the weapons fire traces. And I appreciate you noticing the subtleties of the interaction between Sapphira and Thenurion. Read the character bios?
Hey, a new character shown in background before he (or she) speaks! Are you getting my advice precognitively or something?
I like Thenurion and Saphira’s body language and multiple conversations here- obviously they have two different relationships as husband/wife and captain/subordinate officer, and that first panel depicts a little moment where they’re not worried about letting the first one show through while they’re acting in the second capacity. D’awww. ^_^
Back to business after that, though- looks like our new guy (or girl) is about to get a full reveal on the next page. But why would you expect weapons traces at the scene of a mass abduction, when the abductors can just beam their targets out?
Remember, one colony (shown in the last chapter) had shields protecting the colonists, and the generator for that had to be taken out by the slavers, hence the weapons fire traces. And I appreciate you noticing the subtleties of the interaction between Sapphira and Thenurion. Read the character bios?
Nice perspective view of the ship…is it just me, or is the ship a little too…ummm…phallic to be named “Stella” ? I’m just sayin… 🙂
Nice work on your comic. The story’s better than the artwork, and I think both will improve with time.
Thanks, I’m aiming to improve both.